Septyers Easytoons

Dedicated to demonkilo.

















Wooooow, these actually suck now that I see them.
Anyway, new shit.

Septyer wrote:

Dedicated to demonkilo


Explosion Test

Thats all so far..

Not bad, I know your just starting, but try something more then just an explosion test. Try to make a stick man walk or something. I know it's fun and all to do explosions, but there's about 20 different tutorials on explosions and the best thing about a easytooner is originality. Really nice job though. Try adding more clouds instead of lines next time. Also, try to dissipate the lines. Your making the line shrink from the sides to the center into a dot. For example, don't do, -------to _-----_ to __---__ to___-___. Try to do ------- to -_-_--- to - _- _-- to -__- _ -. It looks much better trust me.

Anyways I'd say low-med begginer. Good explosion for a first though. Looking forward to more.

Low-Beginner________________You____Med-Beginner

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Gunshot Test

thats pretty good septyer,you just need to work on realisticness i guess,i would recromend using the tools more,but otherwise, ure teh bomzors

Septyer:
condog343:

lols,

Not bad, you took my advice on the dissipation. I only see three major problems in this one. One is the bullet, it's too small, try to make it bigger, instead of just a line. Two is the little black line down the left side of the animation. It blinks on and off and you should get rid of it. Three is that you didn't add enough frames. Try adding like 2 more frames. Otherwise nice job.

UPDATE :F

sorry for no stickmen stuff i am only good at explosions...
i suck at stick animating but ill try some stuff

The problem i see here is patience, you need to draw that gun more than one time.

zackfire wrote:

The problem i see here is patience, you need to draw that gun more than one time.

Hey, it's not bad, you defiantly improved from your last one. I know you may think you suck at stick man animations, but try to give them a shot and practice. You may shock yourself.

Ps: Thanks for the dedication.

UPDATE lawl double update really...

Not a bad walk cycle, it's just the resizing of the stick that looks bad. Try using the line tool for the body, arms, and legs and use the circle tool for the head. It helps with the resizing problem. I like the rocket launcher guy, but the blast when he shoots the rocket needs more umph...if you know what I mean. I can't really rate the "Blob" animation, besides that it's really random, lol.

A gunshot should look more like this. (Drawn with mouse)

UPDATE

Septyer wrote:

UPDATE

the animation was smooth and good but what is he doing?

MrPivotX wrote:

Septyer wrote:

UPDATE

the animation was smooth and good but what is he doing?

Ty, but i just animated it... i was bored and made him pull a gun out of his pocket and shoot... i will add to it and put a guy getting shot into it if you want..

Nice EZtoons their smooth and good,
maybe u should try fight scenes and stuff, btw do u use a tablet?


Courtesy Returned

DeadHungryKid wrote:

Nice EZtoons their smooth and good,
maybe u should try fight scenes and stuff, btw do u use a tablet?


Courtesy Returned

Ty for courtesy and no i dont use a tablet.. i use my mouse

wow very good, but the character keeps resizing. but still very smooth and eased.

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lololol <---

HO-HO-HO!
Hi-diddly-do.

Now to the point;
the santa... i mean the gun was good but i think you used too little amount of frames.
And the thingy that flies out (can't remember the name ) was way too fast. Otherwise excellent.
HAPPY EASTER

The full body did re-size and idk what the hell he was doing, but it was still really good for your first full-body attempt.

Just like Marshmallow said, the gun shot could have used more frames and the bullet that came out was a circle, try making an actual bullet. . Overall, really good. You defiantly improved form your last gunshot.

yeah,I like these sep,keep it up,

update

[cough] BUMP! [/cough]

Not bad, a little rough. It reminds me of pikachu's teleport thing, haha.

New stuff.