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PostSubject: Alright, move me up already.   Alright, move me up already. EmptyFri Jun 26, 2009 10:38 pm

Alright, move me up already. 29gc10y
[big]I will always return courtesy if it is a good comment Smile.[/big]

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[color:e283=#000][big][big]Heavy Spacing Collab 115 (Final) Frame Preview:[/big][/big]
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[big]Movements Test

[big]115 Frame Inter Attempt Preview

[big]Heavy Spacing Collab Preview (OLD)[/big]

[big]Hacky Sack Collab Preview[/big]

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[big]Failed Chase Animation[/big]


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[big]Base Test2[/big]

[big]Ipwnall Inspired Sword Animation[/big]

[big]Base Test1[/big]


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[big]He's Da Boss-Floppy Walking Anim[/big]
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Combo Thing

Ninja Fail

Another Combo

Once Again, A New Combo BMG Edit

Um....Failzor or Something

A Dude Falling

Loop

Epic(Not really)Punch

Random Animation With First Ever Stk I Created

[color:e283=#000][big][big][big]OMG TERRIBLE DONT LOOK THEY MIGHT HURT YOUR EYES![/big][/big][/big]

Smooth Sword Anim

Animal Collab Entry

Ninja Star Animation
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[quote=Mainframe]the physics of the first one is a bit awkward but its pretty good overall.
i dunno low-med beginner to med beginner.
you know easing, then use it more.
try to ease every move , you will think it will look not good but with easing your animations are much better.
the back is a bit stiff but the other limbs are not stiff.
great.... keep it up and you will be high beginner in no time.
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PostSubject: Re: Alright, move me up already.   Alright, move me up already. EmptySat Jun 27, 2009 3:32 am

Fix the those big things...
little shakiness and stuff, practise easing and so on blah blah not mid in my opinion..
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PostSubject: Re: Alright, move me up already.   Alright, move me up already. EmptySat Jun 27, 2009 9:50 am

lol this forum has some fucked up ranks. On P_F DHK and I are the same exact rank, border alost inter. He is vet here and Im beginner? Lol dont think that's how it works.
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PostSubject: Re: Alright, move me up already.   Alright, move me up already. EmptySat Jun 27, 2009 10:36 am

Apocalypse wrote:
lol this forum has some fucked up ranks. On P_F DHK and I are the same exact rank, border alost inter. He is vet here and Im beginner? Lol dont think that's how it works.
I think your not middlemen. But your close. Theyr bit stiff and low, but good camera movements and ok 3d.
Beginner----------------------You--Middlemen

And in P_F i'm beginner : )
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PostSubject: Re: Alright, move me up already.   Alright, move me up already. EmptySat Jun 27, 2009 11:00 am

Rasoblade wrote:


And in P_F i'm beginner : )
Only cause you don't post anims there ._.
Seriously, you can post your P_FC 5 now, it'd probably get you inter Very Happy

But this not be the place for that.
AP, you've got some stiffness and sahkyness to work out. The heavy spacing wasn't exactly...heavy spacing sorta. Anyway, just make sure to move every joint in every frame and such.
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PostSubject: Re: Alright, move me up already.   Alright, move me up already. EmptySat Jun 27, 2009 11:16 am

Apocalypse wrote:
lol this forum has some fucked up ranks. On P_F DHK and I are the same exact rank, border alost inter. He is vet here and Im beginner? Lol dont think that's how it works.
First, the animation's smoothness is not all that counts, effects and stuff give a BIG bonus.
Second, this forum is not so strict as like DarkDemon or something. Easier ranks and things like that. (Advance is NOT same as vet somewhere else!)
And yeah, I think you are low middlemen. The newest heavy spacing thing was... well... not as good as the other animations.
And because I don't have animations uploaded I can't ask for courtesy : )
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PostSubject: Re: Alright, move me up already.   Alright, move me up already. EmptySat Jun 27, 2009 3:36 pm

STILL, HOW THE HELL IS DHK ADVANCED????? WE ARE THE SAME RANK.
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PostSubject: Re: Alright, move me up already.   Alright, move me up already. EmptySat Jun 27, 2009 3:50 pm

Apocalypse wrote:
STILL, HOW THE HELL IS DHK ADVANCED????? WE ARE THE SAME RANK.
I just told you. DHK makes great effects and stuff. And decent storylines. But not that I wouldn't like your animations, you are good too! Better than me atleast.

~~+he makes sound effects. ~~son~~
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PostSubject: Re: Alright, move me up already.   Alright, move me up already. EmptySun Jun 28, 2009 3:17 am

and btw, stop whineing, no likes it. so stfu and try to improve your skills.
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PostSubject: Re: Alright, move me up already.   Alright, move me up already. EmptySun Jun 28, 2009 7:27 am

yeah,i say high beginner,there good,but dhk uses tons of effects
and his movements are great
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PostSubject: Re: Alright, move me up already.   Alright, move me up already. EmptySun Jun 28, 2009 2:16 pm

Your animations are good, but DHK is active here. He posts videos on a regular basis and he adds awesome effects in. That's why he's veteran.
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PostSubject: Re: Alright, move me up already.   Alright, move me up already. EmptyMon Jun 29, 2009 8:18 pm

Okay whatever. If you like effects so much lok at this!
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PostSubject: Re: Alright, move me up already.   Alright, move me up already. EmptyMon Jun 29, 2009 8:31 pm

It's not bad, but it's stiff and the movements weren't all that great. Work on easing and stiffness and you'll be around DHK's level.
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PostSubject: Re: Alright, move me up already.   Alright, move me up already. EmptyMon Jun 29, 2009 10:50 pm

Added to it Smile Im loving the splattered organ
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PostSubject: Re: Alright, move me up already.   Alright, move me up already. EmptyTue Jun 30, 2009 2:00 am

Wow man, i can see you have practising!
1. Effects
They weren't so great, but they looked ok. That explosion, you just made it bigger, thats not the correct way. If you want to make it look more realistic, make more moving parts and move every single dot. And it didn't look good when the explosion went over the borders.. Blood.. Blood was ok, make sure you move every little ball each frame. 3d was great too!

2. Movements
Damn, those was good. They were stiff and choppy, but if you make them smoother they would be awesome! It was really good when the sword man ran to the enemy, stopped and then jumped, it looked right but it was choppy.
Your walking style.. horrible. Sorry but i don't like it..

You have improved alot! If i have to rate your animation 1 to 10, i give you 7. Its still not middlemen but almost! Make just normal fight, with some good movements and effects.
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PostSubject: Re: Alright, move me up already.   Alright, move me up already. EmptySun Jul 05, 2009 5:15 am

What the hell was the guy doing before the explosion?
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PostSubject: Re: Alright, move me up already.   Alright, move me up already. EmptySun Jul 12, 2009 2:46 pm

Your animations are good,just not realistic,you have some good foot placement,looking forward to that inters attempt
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