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PostSubject: Septyers Easytoons   Septyers Easytoons EmptySat Apr 04, 2009 3:37 am

Dedicated to demonkilo.

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Wooooow, these actually suck now that I see them.
Anyway, new shit.

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PostSubject: Re: Septyers Easytoons   Septyers Easytoons EmptySat Apr 04, 2009 1:55 pm

Septyer wrote:
Dedicated to demonkilo Wink

Septyers Easytoons My_bes10
Explosion Test

Thats all so far..

Not bad, I know your just starting, but try something more then just an explosion test. Try to make a stick man walk or something. I know it's fun and all to do explosions, but there's about 20 different tutorials on explosions and the best thing about a easytooner is originality. Very Happy Really nice job though. Try adding more clouds instead of lines next time. Also, try to dissipate the lines. Your making the line shrink from the sides to the center into a dot. For example, don't do, -------to _-----_ to __---__ to___-___. Try to do ------- to -_-_--- to - _- _-- to -__- _ -. It looks much better trust me.

Anyways I'd say low-med begginer. Good explosion for a first though. Looking forward to more.

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PostSubject: Re: Septyers Easytoons   Septyers Easytoons EmptySat Apr 04, 2009 9:54 pm

Update with

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Gunshot Test crazy
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PostSubject: Re: Septyers Easytoons   Septyers Easytoons EmptySun Apr 05, 2009 9:16 am

thats pretty good septyer,you just need to work on realisticness i guess,i would recromend using the tools more,but otherwise, crazy ure teh bomzors yahoo!!

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PostSubject: Re: Septyers Easytoons   Septyers Easytoons EmptySun Apr 05, 2009 4:34 pm

Not bad, you took my advice on the dissipation. I only see three major problems in this one. One is the bullet, it's too small, try to make it bigger, instead of just a line. Two is the little black line down the left side of the animation. It blinks on and off and you should get rid of it. Three is that you didn't add enough frames. Try adding like 2 more frames. Otherwise nice job. Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Septyers Easytoons   Septyers Easytoons EmptyMon Apr 06, 2009 4:44 am

UPDATE :F

sorry for no stickmen stuff i am only good at explosions...
i suck at stick animating but ill try some stuff
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PostSubject: Re: Septyers Easytoons   Septyers Easytoons EmptyMon Apr 06, 2009 1:41 pm

The problem i see here is patience, you need to draw that gun more than one time.
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PostSubject: Re: Septyers Easytoons   Septyers Easytoons EmptyMon Apr 06, 2009 3:08 pm

zackfire wrote:
The problem i see here is patience, you need to draw that gun more than one time.

Hey, it's not bad, you defiantly improved from your last one. I know you may think you suck at stick man animations, but try to give them a shot and practice. You may shock yourself.

Ps: Thanks for the dedication. Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Septyers Easytoons   Septyers Easytoons EmptyTue Apr 07, 2009 1:07 am

UPDATE lawl double update really...
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PostSubject: Re: Septyers Easytoons   Septyers Easytoons EmptyTue Apr 07, 2009 1:08 pm

Not a bad walk cycle, it's just the resizing of the stick that looks bad. Try using the line tool for the body, arms, and legs and use the circle tool for the head. It helps with the resizing problem. I like the rocket launcher guy, but the blast when he shoots the rocket needs more umph...if you know what I mean. I can't really rate the "Blob" animation, besides that it's really random, lol.
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PostSubject: Re: Septyers Easytoons   Septyers Easytoons EmptyTue Apr 07, 2009 2:22 pm

Septyers Easytoons Gunshotlearning

A gunshot should look more like this. (Drawn with mouse)
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PostSubject: Re: Septyers Easytoons   Septyers Easytoons EmptyThu Apr 09, 2009 5:32 pm

UPDATE

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PostSubject: Re: Septyers Easytoons   Septyers Easytoons EmptyThu Apr 09, 2009 7:50 pm

Septyer wrote:
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the animation was smooth and good but what is he doing? Septyers Easytoons 188938
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PostSubject: Re: Septyers Easytoons   Septyers Easytoons EmptyThu Apr 09, 2009 8:13 pm

MrPivotX wrote:
Septyer wrote:
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the animation was smooth and good but what is he doing? Septyers Easytoons 188938

Ty, but i just animated it... i was bored and made him pull a gun out of his pocket and shoot... i will add to it and put a guy getting shot into it if you want..
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PostSubject: Re: Septyers Easytoons   Septyers Easytoons EmptyFri Apr 10, 2009 4:41 am

Nice EZtoons their smooth and good,
maybe u should try fight scenes and stuff, btw do u use a tablet?
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PostSubject: Re: Septyers Easytoons   Septyers Easytoons EmptyFri Apr 10, 2009 4:47 am

DeadHungryKid wrote:
Nice EZtoons their smooth and good,
maybe u should try fight scenes and stuff, btw do u use a tablet?
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Ty for courtesy and no i dont use a tablet.. i use my mouse Razz
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PostSubject: Re: Septyers Easytoons   Septyers Easytoons EmptyFri Apr 10, 2009 6:21 am

wow very good, but the character keeps resizing. but still very smooth and eased.

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PostSubject: Re: Septyers Easytoons   Septyers Easytoons EmptyFri Apr 10, 2009 6:35 am

Bumpdate

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santa lololol <---
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PostSubject: Re: Septyers Easytoons   Septyers Easytoons EmptyFri Apr 10, 2009 6:39 am

santa santa santa
HO-HO-HO!
Hi-diddly-do.

Now to the point;
the santa... i mean the gun was good but i think you used too little amount of frames.
And the thingy that flies out (can't remember the name Very Happy) was way too fast. Otherwise excellent.
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PostSubject: Re: Septyers Easytoons   Septyers Easytoons EmptyFri Apr 10, 2009 11:13 am

The full body did re-size and idk what the hell he was doing, but it was still really good for your first full-body attempt.

Just like Marshmallow said, the gun shot could have used more frames and the bullet that came out was a circle, try making an actual bullet. Very Happy. Overall, really good. You defiantly improved form your last gunshot.
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PostSubject: Re: Septyers Easytoons   Septyers Easytoons EmptySun Apr 12, 2009 5:33 pm

yeah,I like these sep,keep it up,Razz

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PostSubject: Re: Septyers Easytoons   Septyers Easytoons EmptyWed Jul 15, 2009 7:14 am

update

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PostSubject: Re: Septyers Easytoons   Septyers Easytoons EmptyWed Jul 22, 2009 12:51 am

[cough] BUMP! [/cough]
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PostSubject: Re: Septyers Easytoons   Septyers Easytoons EmptyWed Jul 22, 2009 6:52 pm

Not bad, a little rough. It reminds me of pikachu's teleport thing, haha.
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PostSubject: Re: Septyers Easytoons   Septyers Easytoons EmptyWed Mar 21, 2012 5:21 am

New stuff.
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